Friday, September 3, 2010

Cassy's Corner- Editing

I've been thinking a lot lately about editing. It all started with my yard. I have 50 flats (not pots or containers, but flats) of impatients planted in three zones in my front yard. I have no idea how many plants that adds up to. But it creates true blankets of deep red and hot pink that bring me pleasure.

Well, my puppy thinks they are pretty great too. She has proudly presented me in the kitchen with mouthfuls of flowers. She has decided that the flower beds are great for short naps and seems to choose to run through them far above using the walkway. I swear she smiles as she does it. My older dog knows the rules, but does seem more like Eeyore as she watches the baby play in my garden of color.

I've moved some of the plants to fill in the newly created empty spaces. And, I've accepted the long tunnels that will just have to be.

So, this is what got me thinking about editing. At first I was dismayed to see all the hard work and expense of putting that many flats in, to be destroyed. Then, I began to see the individual plants because they were now exposed. As the expanse grew, so did the lack of distinction. There was no separating one plant from another. Pretty, yes. But it was a carpet, not an opportunity to have any one stand out.

My chapters in my books are sometimes like that. Too dense. Too over done. And, it's the editing that brings out the chance to see how a character might stand out- speak to you, charm you, make you laugh. I like editing. Probably too much. But this brought a new meaning to me about paring down.

I've decided this is a good metaphor for how I need to look at all sorts of things. My writing, relationships with people I haven't spoken with in much too long, and my puppy who found delight.

11 comments:

Anita Clenney said...

Oh Cassy. I can just picture the flowers. It must be so lovely. And the poor dog...I got a good laugh there. Sorry! But I had a dog once that pulled up anything I planted. Small trees, you name it. He drove me crazy. But what fun memories. Hope these are for you too. I'm editing now and it drives me as crazy as the dog did. But it is wonderful to sit back and see the shine on the story after the edits are done. Just like when I stuck the tree back in the hole the dog ripped it from and it grew to be a massive shade tree.

Mary Martinez said...

Cassy,
I had a dog once who even dug up the phone line, the cable and began to eat my deck.

I like to edit too, but I usually end up filling in because I've missed emotion or layers.

Good luck!

Lindsay said...

You have such a wonderful dog. He must love you quite a lot to bring you flowers. Even if they are dug up from your garden. Editing is one of those necessary evils we must all face. Like getting out of a warm bed in the middle of winter. Unwanted but necessary.

Cassy Pickard said...

Anita: I laughed reading your post. Mina, the puppy, brings me just about anything to show off and tell me how wonderful she is (and she is). Yesterday I found her sleeping on her bed with one of my shoes, one of Jon's, his running pants, and a shirt of mine. Nothing chewed, just a large nest. She has also started talking, dog talk, but a full conversation of noises I'm not used to hearing.

AND, the best- ready? I found her a few days ago standing at my desk, on her hind legs punching the keys on my laptop with one paw- the other one supporting her. So, maybe she likes editing too???

Cassy Pickard said...

Mary: I'd have trouble with losing my phone line, no matter how much I loved the dog, that would be a problem!!

Cassy Pickard said...

Lindsay: You are right. Editing is part of the process. But, one I actually like to do. Others? What are your thoughts?

Lindsay said...

Cassy, What's Mina's email addy. If she loves editing so much she can do my WIP

Liz Lipperman said...

Cassy, Mina sounds adorable. I always liked the mischievous dogs the best.

As for editing, I love the metaphor with tbe impatiens. Our characters do need to stand out among a bed of hot pink flowers.

Lindsay said...

I'd rather have my character stand out surrounded by red and white roses with all those marvelous thorns for protection.

Katt said...

Cassy, your garden must be gorgeous!
Mine is the garden of a pantser for sure. I see lovely plants, buy several, take them home and try to figure out where they'll look best.
Then a week or two go by while I EDIT my garden.
Thanks, because now I understand my own writing/editing in a whole new way!

Kari Lee Townsend said...

Love the flower garden metaphor, Cass! And I too can picture your garden...it must be beautiful.

I'm off to edit my own WIP. Now that the kids are finally set for school and start on Tuesday, it's time to get back to work!