Friday, April 1, 2011

Barbie's Bunkhouse: Finding Little Gems

Before I went to bed last night I was thinking about my post. Because like any TRUE pantser, I didn't do this ahead of time like I'd wanted to. :-) And it all worked out because I got thinking about a show that I've discovered on the History Channel, called American Pickers. These guys travel all across America looking for great finds, or what us old folks would call: Antiques. It just amazes me how out in the middle of nowhere, upon acres and acres of land, they will find people who have been collecting things either on purpose (with a plan to see but never do) or without knowing it because they just can't part with their things. The very sad part is, this beautiful, interesting stuff (that no doubt has a story or sometimes a significant historical value) just keeps piling up. Year after year, these people keep collecting and holding on. Sometimes the stuff is in their garage, but other times it's out somewhere on the property covered in tarps or shoved into sheds. All the while collecting dust and just rotting away.

Then along come the American Pickers. They amaze me with their knowledge, and quite honestly I think what they offer people for their antiques is decently fair. Now here's the killer. Even after having someone come to their place, dig through towers of stufff (for hours even!) to find pieces they want.....The owners STILL don't want to part with their stuff!!!!! It's crazy! There was a man, probably in his 70's who had acres of land, and throughout the land there were sheds just crammed from top to bottom with antiques. I mean, the AP guys were jumping over streams and walking through woods to get to some of this stuff! And they found some wonderful antiques. I think when all was said and done, they offered the man like $10,000 and the man hesitated. Really??? It's been sitting out in the middle of nowhere, not being enjoyed by anyone, and you're being offered $10K (which is $10K more than you currently have) and you don't know if you can let that stuff go? I stared in shock at the TV. I couldn't believe it. But then, the old hawk played the game! He told the AP guys if they could make it a little sweeter, he'd make the deal! And would you believe after going back and forth at least 3 more times, he got another couple thousand out of them! Just amazing.

So what, pray tell, does this have to do with writing? (ha! I'm sounding like Liz!) Well, let me tell you. We all start with that first book, that if you're lucky will sell - as I know some people this has happened to. Or it's always going to be your baby, your learning book - and maybe a book you've reworked so many times you could recite it page by page. But the stories that come after that baby are the ones who are going to leave the nest. But only if we let them. As we know, writing is a process that unfortunately in today's economy can take a while to see publication. But we keep writing. We keep creating stories (our own little gems). Now, we can keep them tucked away because maybe we dont' think they are good enough or worth much. Or we can get advice from an agent, editor or trusted CP on how to make it strong enough with plot and characters, find that unique hook so it won't collect dust and fade away.

But WE have to be willing to take that advice. Be open minded to change (even if it changes a character we love - because he/she may have a place in a different story, just not this one) so that when an editor comes along (sometimes unexpectedly) and wants to make a deal on that story - you can take the deal and let the story go. I know writers who have great ideas, even great execution. But they can't or won't change parts of their story. They could be missing out on selling their little gem. Yes, it's your story and no, you don't have to change it for anyone. But think of that old guy and all his stuff....What good was it doing him sitting miles away in a storage shed covers in dirt, dust, and other antiques (not to mention all the critters residing there)? So what good is your story just sitting on your computer hard drive or printed off in a binder? In my own search for a new story idea, I've come across older stories I'd started. And me? I'm open to anything. I will do what it takes to get my words out there. Ca'ching! I'm not in it for the money (although it would be a wonderful thing), I write because I love it and I want my words to entertain people. So yeah, I will change it to anything it needs to be in order to work. And many a time, I've used those little gems to be the start of a fantastic story - whether it's the characters I've loved or the plot. I've taken something from those stories and turned it into something new.

So do you have any little gems hidding on your hard drive or in a notebook? If you do, now you have the weekend to dig them out, dust them off and polish them up and prepare them for the NYT Best Seller List!

14 comments:

Anita Clenney said...

Hi Barbie Jo. I LOVE American Pickers. Hubby got me started on it. I'm a bit of a pack rat myself, but I'm amazed, thrilled, and a little depressed at the junk people have stored. I'm overwhelmed at the junk in my shed. I can't imagine having stuff stored for generations.

I'm one of the lucky ones who sold their first book. It became the second book in my series. The first book that sold was the second book I started. As soon as Christine saw it, she told me that it was my break out novel, and she was right. I feel very fortunate that it sold, since I cut my writing teeth on that book, but it had a unique idea, and I think with all the revising and polishing, I got it into a saleable state. I think it's the book of my heart.

Barbie Jo Mahoney said...

Hi Anita!!! We found American Pickers by accident and I'm hooked. I just love old stuff and I, too, am a self-proclaimed pack rat (or "packy" as my husband calls me). Hey, let's face it, you just never know when you're going to need something. Like old manuscripts!!!

Yes, you are one of the lucky ones! And I think that makes it even more special. But see? You went on to write that 2nd book and the book of your heart followed. I think it's great!

And now you're signing at a table with Nora Roberts! EEEK!! I still grin like an idiot when I think of that. How super cool!!!

I really think persistece is key in this business. That, and using every resource you've got in order to get that saleable idea out there for editors to drool over.

You can't see if you don't write, so take a look at those little gems every once in a while and see what happens with a little polish.

Anita, you are living proof! :-)

Liz Lipperman said...

You are so right about being open-minded with your writing. I have so many friends who keep revising the same darn book over and over. Actually, I did that, too, before I had a talk with our agent late one night. My first book had made the rounds and got rejected. The second book wasn't big enough for NY, and I had just finished the third book, my paranormal mystery. I asked her which one she wanted me to work on. She looked me square in the eye and said - write something completely new and different.

Not what I wanted to hear, but I did it anyway. I wrote a proposal for a RS that I think is awesome, but one editor comment was she'd heard the concept a hundred times. Crap!

In the meantime an editor read my third book and loved it but wanted a cozy. At first I told Christine there was no way I could write a cozy, but the more I thought about it the more I decided I could do anything I wanted.

Moral of this story - I will have three books out soon, none of which are my 1-2-or 3 books.

Bring on the American Book Pickers!!

FYI - Blogger just ate this response, but fortunately, it's done it enough to me that I now save every long entry before I hit Publish!!

Cassy Pickard said...

Okay, Blogger just ate my long response. Great post, Barbie Jo. You've got me thinking.

Rather than retype my long response, I'm going to make you all wait for my next posting. I think the writer's retreat I am attending has some strong ties to today's blog.

Kari Lee Townsend said...

Oh my....blogger is acting up today. Time for a "time-out" for blogger :-)

I've never seen American Pickers...I just might have to check it out.

I don't even want to think about how many books I wrote before I sold, but at least I have one hell of an inventory. A lot of those stories are "workable" when I have the time to give them the unique hooks they need.

Great post!

Barbie Jo Mahoney said...

Ooh, Liz, American Book Pickers! Barbie Likes this!

I'm blogging with such a great group of ladies! and Liz, your thinking is so true for any writer out there IF they can keep that open mind.

You can write ANYTHING you want to. Open yourself up to the challenge - it doesn't have to be difficult, and look what happens! 3 book deal!!

And even you, Kari..you just kept writing! Now you have the YA AND Cozy books as proof it all pays off! And that backlist of stories?? Those will be your gems.

Cassy...I understand you're on Italia time...but really?? we gotta wait??? That is soo evil. Are you concocting a cozy set in some quaint little italian village???

Donna Cummings said...

Barbie Jo, this is a great post. :) I haven't seen the show (I don't really watch TV), but it seems like a perfect analogy. We get so emotionally attached to things, and doubly so for our books, but you're so right -- if they aren't out there, what good are they doing?

I've written several books, and I love each one of them, and I'm hopeful there's a home for them some day. But until then, I just keep writing more things -- cuz you just never know which one will get picked! :)

Barbie Jo Mahoney said...

Thanks Donna, I'm not as big of a TV buff as I used to be. But there are occasions when I will sit down and find something interesting.

I have that same train of thought with my own stories. They are special in their own way, and I do hope they all find a home. There are actually a couple characters that I think are going to be transplanted to a new town, new plot. I love them too much to keep them hidden!

The secret is to keep 'em coming!!! Eventually something is going to stick. And when it does...look out because all your hidden gems are waiting to be discovered too!

Cassy Pickard said...

Barbie Jo: Yup, now I've decided you gotta wait and I'll fill you all in the writer's retreat. Christine is doing a GREAT job helping with the brainstorming sessions and in offering lots of industry talk. More to come....

And, yes, my stories are set in Italy--not cozies though. A little more evil and dastardly deeds.. He, he, he, he.

Shane Scollins said...

Barbie Jo,

Good post. I'm an American Pickers fan too. And I've noticed a lot of writers are now putting their old "junk" for sale as eBooks. A few are even finding some gold in that junk.

One even convinced me to ePub an older manuscript so I've spent the week doing edits.

So instead of it sitting on my hard drive, it will be sitting on an Amazon server...waiting for some desperate Kindle reader with an extra $1.99...

Tiffinie Helmer said...

The way readers tastes change, what they don't want today they are going to be begging for tomorrow. So that dusty manuscript hiding under the bed, could see the light of day. Who could have predicted zombies would be a hit?

Sharla Rae said...

Found your blog on FF &P loop. I write historicals and love American Pickers so I loved your blog too. :) It's easy for a writer to imagine stories jumping out of all those items. I can take a lesson. I need to submit my stuff. :) Sharla

Barbie Jo Mahoney said...

Cassy - you are a sneaky one!! Glad the retreat is going so well! Christine is a fantastic motivator and I can't wait to hear all about it.

Shane - you're right, self-pubbing is all the buzz right now. And speaking of which...you just missed the perfect opportunity to plug yourself and that ebook (silly! haven't Kari and I taught you anything??) Just kidding! but seriously, if you check this again before the weekend is over...give yourself a plug. Inquiring minds want to know what's the scoop in Shane Land! I'm looking at an old MS of mine as well to self-pub. But that's further down on my to-do list.

Tiffanie - you are soo right! readers AND editors tastes and wants change like the wind! And the key is to dust those old puppies off and try again! You just never know what's hidden there.

Sharla - Sooo glad you found us! M&M sends a big wave to FF & P!! Glad you liked the blog. And with historicals especially...what STORIES there are to tell. I bet you can even get an idea from an American Pickers episode! some of the items they find just blow me away..and if those items could talk..WOW!!!! And yes, get your stuff together and get it out! You could be sitting on that next Historical Best Seller. ;-) Hope to see you back and tell all your friends. We have new posts all week long and I'm in the Bunkhouse every friday starting May!!

Shane Scollins said...

Barbie Jo,

Oh, you've taught me well. I thought about a plug, but since I'm still doing the final edit and working on the cover art, I didn't want to get too far ahead of myself. You know...chickens, eggs...failure to hatch etc...

However, I'm shooting for a middle April release for my romantic suspense manuscript THE SWEET SIXTEENTH on both Amazon and Smashwords.

And of course since I can NEVER leave any story alone this final edit is taking twice as long as it should have.

But all the details are at my website shanescollins.com