Today we have an exciting treat for you...Mystery Author Patrica Deuson. She's here to tell us about her road to publication, and her fabulous new mystery SUPERIOR LONGING. Take it away Patricia :-)
Queries from Africa
My path to publication began in Africa. While I began writing sporadically after our return stateside from Cairo, Egypt, I had no thoughts about where it could lead, I just did it. On our second post in Africa, this time to Niamey, Niger, I continued to write, still with no thought that my writing should be anywhere but on my computer. By the time we moved to Ouagadougou, Burkina Faso, I had written an entire book and decided I wanted to be published.
So I sent a lot of queries across the ocean to all parts of the US. I didn’t get a lot of answers back, but the few I did get turned me down flat. Just wanting to be published wasn’t enough. I didn’t really find this discouraging, but took it as a bit of a challenge and continued to write and query as we moved to Abidjan, Cote d’Ivoire. More rejections followed than ever before! Was this a good sign? By the time we got back to the states again, I’d written the second book in the series. I thought it might be easier to market because I knew more about writing and because I was now living where the action was. But no.
Then I happened upon the Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award Contest. I entered and made it to the second cut. This really didn’t mean much, but it meant something to me.
I took that second book, edited it six ways from Sunday and rewrote, rewrote, rewrote and polished and polished. I also redid my query letter. I wasn’t very good at querying and knew it, so I worked hard on that. Then I began to send it around. It would be nice to say that there were no more rejections, but there were. Lots. However, I did get 2 offers, almost simultaneously. One was for a print book and one was for an e-book. Since this was a little more than a year ago, ebooks weren’t quite the market force they are now, but even then I knew I wanted an ebook. I went with Echelon Press. Superior Longing is the second in the Neva Moore mystery series. I’m working on the 3rd now and have done quite a bit of work on the 4th.
Here’s a synopsis:
Life is what happens when you're looking elsewhere. In the mystery, SUPERIOR LONGING, looking elsewhere is also dangerous. Sierra Nevada Moore is administrator/accountant/instructor/renovator-in-residence at Cooks' Inn, a cooking school newly relocated to the central Californian coast, and ready to open its doors. But will it? Not if her boss, Linnea Addams, keeps getting in the way of the perfectly fine opening Neva has planned. It’s not like they can afford a delay, as Neva, who keeps the books, knows too well. So it’s a kitchen face-off. Until Neva gets a call that changes everything.
Paul Beeton, her uncle and only relative, has drowned. The uncle to whom she owes everything. She will go to Michigan, to the shores of Lake Superior, to see him to his grave, no matter the consequence. Neva cobbles together a plan that is almost bound to fail and leaves, intending to return quickly. But as the details of Paul's death twist and turn, her pursuit of the truth weaves thru small town politics, smuggling, and superstition as she hunts Paul's killer to where it all began, back in the family and another death in an icy lake.
Look for Superior Longing, available 9/15/11, at these fine places: OmniLit.com, Smashwords, Kindle, Nook. Neva can be found at:
Her Blog
Her Facebook page
Thanks for stopping by, Patricia! Okay, folks, let's show her the love and bring on your comments and questions.
25 comments:
Please give a warm welcome to fellow mystery author Patricia Deuson.
I enjoyed Collective Instinct and am looking forward to reading Superior Longing!
You've lived in some amazing places, Patricia. Maybe one will be a setting in a future Neva Moore book?
Kari,
There would be stories to tell! Sights and sound and smells too. There was a murder in our house in the Ivory Coast, fortunately before we moved in. The bullet holes were still in the wall!
Maybe some day Neva will get to take a trip?
Thanks,
Pat
Kara,
Thanks! I have considered a foreign setting for a book but there are considerations. First it would have to be set in the ex-pat community, and while I'm sure I could find plenty of opportunities for murder, there are unusual challenges. Dealing with local law enforcement, at least in West Africa, means dealing with the Napoleonic Code, where you're guilty until proven innocent.
But a story could start on the banks of the Nile and follow her hone....
Pat
Pat: Welcome to M&M!! It's great to have you here. I'm intrigued with hearing more about writing in a foreign country. My stories are set in Italy and I have to carefully think through what the distinctive features are (of course wine and food) that would set it apart and truly give the writer a sense of place.
Has that been a challenge for you, or given that you are living in these spots makes it easy to write? Love to hear your thoughts.
Cassy,
I live state side now, in California where the Neva Moore mysteries are based, if don't always take place. While I was living in Africa I wasn't writing about it. I absolutely enjoyed the 10 years, 5 countries, we lived in with the ups and downs: my oldest son was born in Cairo, on an island in the Nile; my youngest son was caught with his school and put into lock-down [Africa style they had a safe room] as a political riot swirled around. We were always aware what the evacuation route was, and what we had to do to 'get out'. I never found Africa an easy place to write about. On the other hand California is a 'dream'!
Pat
Pat, your story sounds intriguing. Since I write "foodies" anything with cooking is a must have to me.
Thanks for joining us at M & M. I wish you much success with your series. It's always fun to hear about a writer's journey to publication.
Liz,
Thanks! I don't know that Neva likes to talk food as much as I do, but I've given her a blog to see what she'll do with it.
I grew up reading Nancy Drew, The Hardy Boys, & The Fannie Farmer Cookbook, making 'things' my skeptical sibs have not yet forgotten. I once made a cake with an impervious frosting that they floated away [and saluted] on the lake in the backyard. It may still be there!
Pat
Hi Patricia! I found your post to be quite interesting; I just bet the stories you could tell would keep us entertained for quite a long time.
I grew up reading mysteries but then went in several different directions. I've been slowly getting back to mysteries and found this blogspot. I'm delighted I found it in time to meet you and your books.
Wishing you much success.
Karen
Karen,
It's always a delight to meet a fellow mystery fan. Kari's Kave is a cool and cozy place to settle down with one too!
I hope you do enjoy 'Superior Longing', Neva Moore's first foray into the world of mayhem and murder. Here are some links to help you find her:
http://superiorlonging.blogspot.com/
http://goo.gl/AfIVM
Pat
Oh, I do love me some mysteries with food in them! I'd love to read about Africa, though--Like the No. 1 Ladies' Detective Agency. The difficulties of dealing with an ex-pat community and local law enforcement would only make things more interesting! But maybe Neva could get involved in an International Festival or something, and get to cook African dishes. Ground nut stew--my favorite!
Marian Allen
Fantasies, mysteries, comedies, recipes
I enjoyed learning more about Patricia Deuson and her journey to publication. I also work with Echelon Press and have a book coming out with them next year entitled Stormy Encounters.
Marion,
Your enthusiasm and flow of ideas gave me a chuckle and reminded me of all the good times I've have in Africa. What I found almost universally is that despite poverty and hardship [and there is plenty of both] the people I met knew how to have a good time and had a wonderfully cheerful out look. Music was always in the air and I can hear the beat now.
Groundnut stew??? Sounds like another blog post!
Pat
Thanks, Angela, and good luck with your book!
Pat
Hi Pat,
Good to see you here!
I admire your courage in choosing an ebook before we all saw the benefits of epubbing. It certainly looks like the right choice now!
I'll be looking forward to reading Superior Longing.
Elise,
Thanks! I guess it was one of my 'goals'!
And thanks for coming by!
pat
Pat, you've certainly lived in some interesting places. I love stories set in Africa, but I'm really looking forward to your new one on Lake Superior (I think that's what I read). Good luck with. Echelon's a good press. :)
Ellis,
Superior Longing is set on the shores of the Lake in a tiny town, Crystal Cove, I created for maximum mischief. If you went to the Superior Longing blog: http://superiorlonging.blogspot.com/ you do find the first chapter.
thanks,
Pat
Pat, I had no idea you had lived in West Africa. I wonder if we bumped into each other! I lived for a year in Bamako, Mali (1991-1992 school year) and a year in Ouagdougou (1998-1999). We visited Cote d'Ivoire twice and Niamey once. Amazing places. I wrote a book of memoirs, A Year in Ouagdougou, but didn't get it published, and only wrote two short stories set in Africa (also unpubbed), although my mystery protagonist has a background that includes a Peace Corps stint in Mali. I look forward to reading your series!
Edith Maxwell
Edith,
Funny we should meet like this! Ex-pats are the best, don't you think!
I should mention [a warning really] I don't write about Africa. My books take place in the states and stay there.
I've been troubled by the recent upheavals sweeping the continent and think often of the people we knew and what their lives must be like. And, since my husband is Belgian, 3rd gen born in the Congo, and evacuated during the first [of many] horrific civil wars, Africa for me will remain problematic.
I enjoy reading about the lighter side of Africa but I can't write it.
Were you Peace corps in Ouaga? We were USAID.
Pat
No, you said you don't write about Africa. That's cool.
My ex-husband taught African languages and linguistics, so we were there twice on his sabbatical years, with our two sons (first time at ages 2 1/2 and 5, second time ages 9 1/2 and 12). Did we overlap in Ouaga (98-99)?
Edith
Edith,
So it might have been over kill??? I always took the kids home for the summer so we would have been gone soon after school ASO? ended and then on to Cote d'Ivoire. My husband taught a class at U Ouaga because he loves to teach. Economics.
Pat
My kids went to ASO, 4th grade and 7th grade. Wow. They had a lockdown one day because of protests. Very scary. We lived way across town, too.
You have such an interesting background, and I love the recipes you occasionally post.
I'm an eBook fan too. I have Superior Longing and can't wait till I have a chance to read it.
Thanks, Ellis! As you know, since this post came out, the book has arrived and is available on Amazon here:
http://goo.gl/Lf1VI
Pat
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