Before I post this blog, I must first apologize for missing
last week. Life for all of us has its moments of hectic stuff. But here I am
now and I thank you for checking in with us.
Today I have been struck by color and texture. As we write
and as we read, we follow the cadence that comes with words that describe, that
create images, that bring us to the front of the action, romance and setting. How
do you put that in a rhythm that communicates with your readership?
I was recently staying with family and offered to put
together some small bouquets as someone needed to offer gifts. I walked the property looking for what would be interesting for three arrangements. The
colors, textures and the sense of fall were more than evident. The plants were
gorgeous (not my doing) and the color range magnificent. My mother has put in a
fabulous combination of plants that will be with us until frost.
Putting together the bunches reminded me of how we pick and
choose our words. A little yellow here will help the contrast, maybe some blue,
Oh—we need big purple hydrangea blossoms and little euonymus so there is a
scale change. Yet, there should also be small berries
with some medium leaves. Where is the yellow? What about some coleus or marigolds?
Back to the analogy to writing, I suspect you can follow my
intent. We have big scenes with huge emotion or action or peril. We contrast
that with moments of quiet or reflection or doubt. We add a slightly kooky
side-kick who brings the purple to the bouquet. We try our best to write snappy
dialogue that takes you, the reader, right into the moment—like wanting to lean
forward and sniff the flowers I added. Engagement. We seek to draw our readers
in to the worlds we create.
I am finding so many metaphors around me to the process of
writing. As fall is in full bloom here in Connecticut I have been trying to
find good words to describe the colors of the trees, the sound of my neighbor
blowing leaves, the cold spray as my dogs shake off lake water, the changing
light at 4 pm, the sound of the coxswain calling orders to the eight rowers
behind him.
These aren’t scenarios that appear in any of my books. They
are quiet private exercises in searching for descriptions and hopefully just
the right word.
1 comment:
I'd love to hear how you frame your thoughts and pick your words. Also, what work for you when you read? Do you like deep descriptions? Fast conversations? The setting as a character unto itself? What talks to you?
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